Sunday, August 15, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! This week I am posting a random six sentence portion of my work in progress "Brothers in Blue: Max."

She hooted, shifted, then bent over the table again.

Max swore he could hear the reply of silent “hoots” from all the men there. Actually, he thought he heard some sighs and groans from along the crowded bar as the little red skirt eased its way up her thighs. Higher, higher…

For Christ sakes! He hoped she was at least wearing underwear!

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6 comments:

Stacey Kennedy said...

LOL - It was a bit of a challenge to read that with the sexy guy to the left.

So...was she wearing any????

Dawne Prochilo said...

And all the other men in attendance hope she's NOT wearing any...LOVE IT

Dee Carney said...

But wearing underwear takes all the fun out of it! :P

Hailey Edwards said...

(Dee would know allll about that. I've heard things...seen webcams...

Kayelle Allen said...

I tried to scroll down so I could concentrate but the hunk doesn't scroll, dammit! LOL What was I supposed to read again?

Oh, right... good excerpt, and yeah I think he's the only one there who's worried that she's not wearing undies. ^_^

Alanna Coca said...

Ah, men in blue. Enjoy the research Jeanne? ;)