Sunday, January 23, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! This week I am posting a random six sentences of my best-selling, interracial menage, DOUBLE DARE, available in ebook here at Loose Id, in paperback here, or for your Kindle here.

She hated taffeta. She hated pink. She hated frilly dresses.

She took a long swig from her glass.

And she hated Peter. The asshole.


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16 comments:

Jessica E. Subject said...

Wow, she's very hateful. Great way to get her emotions across. :) Wonder what Peter did.

Pip Green said...

lol! I hate most of those too, but can't wait to hear why Peter's been added to the list.

Jayel Kaye said...

I'm with her. but if she drinks long enough she might change her mind. at least about Peter?

An Open Book said...

Short and sweet...or is it bittersweet...great excerpt

Taryn Kincaid said...

To the point. And really shows her emotions and her character. Perfect!

Unknown said...

Nice sharp six. Makes me want to know what's happening next.

Kim Knox said...

Oo I like that!

Arlene said...

I adore short lines right to the point. My favorite of SSS so far.

Leigh Ellwood said...

Haha! Great excerpt. Thanks for sharing.

Leigh Ellwood said...

Haha! Great excerpt. Thanks for sharing.

Trish said...

Great characterization.

I get a very strong sense of characterization in just those six short lines.

Very well done.

Joleene Naylor said...

She knows what she likes - or doesn't ;)

Alanna Coca said...

Very emotional yet clean. I want more!

Unknown said...

HA! She's in a mood! Her anger shines throug! WTG!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Love her sharpness, she's obviously had a really bad day...but is Peter the reason for said bad day? I want to find out, sensing a book purchase coming on!

Emily Cale said...

Lot's of history caught up in those sentences.