She hated taffeta. She hated pink. She hated frilly dresses.
She took a long swig from her glass.
And she hated Peter. The asshole.
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She hated taffeta. She hated pink. She hated frilly dresses.
She took a long swig from her glass.
And she hated Peter. The asshole.
16 comments:
Wow, she's very hateful. Great way to get her emotions across. :) Wonder what Peter did.
lol! I hate most of those too, but can't wait to hear why Peter's been added to the list.
I'm with her. but if she drinks long enough she might change her mind. at least about Peter?
Short and sweet...or is it bittersweet...great excerpt
To the point. And really shows her emotions and her character. Perfect!
Nice sharp six. Makes me want to know what's happening next.
Oo I like that!
I adore short lines right to the point. My favorite of SSS so far.
Haha! Great excerpt. Thanks for sharing.
Haha! Great excerpt. Thanks for sharing.
Great characterization.
I get a very strong sense of characterization in just those six short lines.
Very well done.
She knows what she likes - or doesn't ;)
Very emotional yet clean. I want more!
HA! She's in a mood! Her anger shines throug! WTG!
Love her sharpness, she's obviously had a really bad day...but is Peter the reason for said bad day? I want to find out, sensing a book purchase coming on!
Lot's of history caught up in those sentences.
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