Logan Reed jammed a finger into the neck of his white oxford and pulled. He needed some fucking air.
What the hell was he doing here anyway?
As he surveyed the church, a bead of sweat popped out on his forehead. His breathing had become shallow and quick. He was going to hyperventilate right there and pass out, making a fool of himself in front of everyone.
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15 comments:
A little hot under the collar? I hope he's about to bust up a wedding! I LOVE when that happens!
I'm curious as to why he's there too. :) Hope you'll share more next week.
I'm with Taryn. I love that too. You can feel his meltdown in this piece. Great six.
Hmm, so many reasons pop into my head about why he's nervous in church.
Whoa. Lots of emotion there!
I want to know why he's there. I agree with Taryn
Great imagery! Love it!
This is great! So succinct and yet it gives a very definite impression of the character!
Very powerful Six! WTG!
His powerful reaction sure makes me curious about what's causing it!
oh, wonder what's got him so hot under the collar! Has got my interest, hope they'll be more on this for the next SSS
As one who has read this one I can only tell all of you who are guessing. Read it. It's worth your money!!!
Intriguing six!
Thanks Line! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Wow! You packed so much emotion into a few short sentences.
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