Sunday, January 09, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! This week I am posting a random six sentence portion of my best-selling, m/m short story, RIP CORD, available here at Phaze Books.

Gil’s lips parted and he struggled to breathe.

As much as he wanted Rip to just take him quick and hard, he knew better. Without lube and without condoms, there wasn’t much they would be able to do. And Gil was not packing a condom. Not today. He never would have guessed in a thousand years he would have needed one for his class reunion.


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14 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

I love the name Rip for one of your characters! This excerpt alone is a great intro to RIP CORD.

Kim Knox said...

Wow, that's nice, Jeanne :)

Eve Cassidy said...

Very nice. Guess he wasn't a boy scout huh? LOL

charmainegordon author said...

Terrific! Not a word wasted.

Anonymous said...

I'm with Eve - I bet he wishes he was a boy scout always prepared.

Lyncee

Laurie A. Green said...

Hi Jeanne. Gil forgot another important motto: "Don't leave home without it!"

Great set up, excellent phrasing and I loved the last line.

Oh, also love the title. (A lot of great titles in these SSS offerings.)

Jayel Kaye said...

very good post. and I agree with the name rip for the character.

Kayelle Allen said...

I'm thinking this is going to be a real test of willpower. ;o

Eleri Stone said...

I wonder how many people actually do pack condoms to a class reunion? Poor Rip. Great six.

Lex Valentine said...

Nice heat!

Arlene said...

Somehow I suspect this pair will figure out a means to have some fun. well done.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Hmm. Somehow I think his opinion of high school "reunions" is about to change!

heatherthurmeier said...

Poor guy. Nothing worse than wanting and not getting!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Great tension, here! Love the names!