Sunday, November 21, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! This week I am posting a random six sentence portion of my work in progress "Brothers in Blue: Marc." (the second book in the Brother in Blue series.) This is a continuation of last week's six sentences. It "finishes" the scene. :)

Leah let out a shaky breath. She wanted to scream, curse. She wanted to call him names. Instead she straightened out her skirt and her panties. Her body was warm and flushed.

She smiled.

She just had one of the best climaxes she had had in a while. A long while.

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13 comments:

Marsha A. Moore said...

Difficult moment to muster anger at the guy. Great snippet.

The Book Blogger said...

Nice snippet! left me needing more.
Kerrianne

Jessica Subject said...

A great way to finish the chapter, but it leaves me wanting to read the next.

Rebecca Royce said...

Oooh, I wish I could see more!

Dee Carney said...

And she wants to curse? Um, he's doing it wrong. LOL

Taryn Kincaid said...

Ahhhhhhhh.

Emily Cale said...

Very nice! Leaves me wanting a lot more.

Jayel Kaye said...

HArd to be mad at anything after something so good.

Lex Valentine said...

Hey, there is no arguing with an orgasm.

Eleri Stone said...

I love the whole setup you have going w/ this. Can't wait to read more.

Christa Paige said...

Outwardly she is so composed and inside, she is coming apart, can't wait to see what it is like when she lets go of that control.

Marie Dees said...

Hee, I liked the visual for this one!

heatherthurmeier said...

Not sure she should be yelling at him since I think he just showed her a pretty good time. :) Great snippet.