Sunday, October 17, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! This week I am posting a random six sentence portion of my work in progress "Brothers in Blue: Max."

His voice was uneven as he said, “I know that this is our first official date, but can I get a kiss?”

Her eyes widened, then narrowed as she studied his face. “I don’t know. I don’t want you to think I’m easy.”

He chuckled. “Too late.”

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9 comments:

graylinfox said...

LOL! Love it..

Stacey Kennedy said...

HA! Perfect!!! :D

Taryn Kincaid said...

Funny!

Jayel Kaye said...

I laughed outloud! loved it

Dee Carney said...

LMAO! That bastard!

Dawne Prochilo said...

I agree...perfectly said. If it were me I may have to slap him just for effect...lol

Christa Paige said...

Witty dialog is my favorite thing to read, besides the hot stuff. This was fun repartee.

Jessica Subject said...

Brought a smile to my face. I love the last sentence!

PG Forte said...

lol! Nice. I'm w/ Dawne. Slap the bastard. ;)