Sunday, November 07, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! This week I am posting a random six sentence portion of my work in progress "Brothers in Blue: Marc." (the second book in the Brother in Blue series.)

Marc’s voice was deep and husky as he moaned, “Was he this hard?”

Leah’s lips parted, but nothing but a rush of breath released.

He stroked her fingers up and down his length. “Was he this big?” Her fingers curled as she cupped him and felt the heaviness. Marc put his lips against her ear, and his warm breath sent a chill down her spine. “Was he this hot for you?”

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17 comments:

MarieDees said...

Ah, is there a little penis envy going on? Fun!

Marsha A. Moore said...

Very hot! Mmm.

Vivien Jackson said...

Spare, concise writing: very easy on the eyes. I'd been thinking about reading some of your work, but this excerpt has cinched it. Do you have a favorite book of yours?

Jayel Kaye said...

Sometimes I get "twinges" when I read these thing... THAT was a definite 3 twinger!

Eleri Stone said...

So hot. So intriguing. I definitely want more.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Holy SMOKES! LOVE THIS!

Sizzling. Love the blend of action and spot-on dialogue.

Dawne Prochilo said...

OK..the first sentence had me hooked... more plz

Emily Cale said...

Um, was he? So hot! Can't wait to see more.

Jeanne St. James said...

Vivien, my favorite is Double Dare. But it depends what you like. Banged Up is a m/f with light suspense, Rip Cord is a m/m short story, and Double Dare is a m/m/f interracial erotic romance.

heatherthurmeier said...

Well, hello! Very hot!!

Dee Carney said...

Whoa. Damn woman. You have a way with words!

Jeanne St. James said...

Thanks everyone for the complements. It motivates me to get my butt back in the chair to finish the first one in the series.

Christa Paige said...

Oh my word. That's just too delicious! I had to read it twice, totally indulged.

Lex Valentine said...

Oh yeah, baby! *fans self*

Jessica Subject said...

Penis envy? Who cares? This is hot!

Alanna Coca said...

Who?! Who is he!? Is he there!?

Six isn't enough!

Layna said...

Now that was hawt!