Thursday, September 23, 2010

13 Ways to Use The Eyes


13 WAYS TO USE THE EYES:

For examples, I've pulled some (copyrighted) sentences from my first release BANGED UP, my best-selling erotic romance! It's available in ebook and Kindle!


1. His gaze flicked to the gun, before returning to the shapely naked thighs which couldn’t belong to a kid—no way.

2. She studied the angle of his jaw, the curve of his upper lip, and the edge of his brow before looking into his eyes.

3. He studied the contrast of her delicate, white hand next to his darker skin.

4. She eyed him skeptically through the long mane of red hair falling over her face.

5. Hands planted on her hips, she looked at him in astonishment.

6. Colby looked up to see Mace’s dark eyes attempting to peer into her soul.

7. His heated stare burned her, leaving a sensation of hot liquid flowing down to her toes, making her knees wobble.

8. She stared at him, no smile, eyes serious.

9. It was only fair after feeling his eyes burn her bare skin earlier.

10. His heart thumped a little harder while he watched her slender figure work her way across the PT room.

11. He dropped his arms to his side, his eyes dark, clouded, as he watched her release the top button and slowly slide the zipper down.

12. Mace reluctantly released the shirt, pushing away the feeling of regret, and watched the fabric catch on her hip.

13. She shot him an incredulous look.


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5 comments:

maddybarone said...

Looks like I'm the first to comment! Here's my favorite, #11:
He dropped his arms to his side, his eyes dark, clouded, as he watched her release the top button and slowly slide the zipper down.

Alice Audrey said...

I like the way it takes her a while to get to the eyes in #2.

My list is here.

Carly Carson said...

Hmmmm. I'm intrigued by #1. Cute idea.

Kimberly Menozzi said...

I agree with Alice - the slow build in #2 is verrra niice... ;)

Heather said...

Excellent example, Jeanne!
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