Sunday, May 23, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! This week I am posting a random six sentence portion of an unnamed work in progress.

Without moving her lips, keeping the smile stiffly in place, she demanded in a low voice, “Unzip your jeans.”

“What?”

“Smile back at me as though we're sharing a joke and… unzip… your… jeans.”

“We are in a room full of people—“

She leaned in to murmur against his ear. “And I have a skirt on. No one is going to see.”
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5 comments:

Dawne Prochilo said...

Jeanne, Jeanne, Jeanne- you never cease to amaze me- LOVE your post.

Ariel Tachna said...

Eye-catching choice of sentences and quite an interesting idea! Can any author participate?

Jeanne St. James said...

Thanks, Dawne. Yes, Ariel, check out this link: http://sixsunday.blogspot.com/

Dee Carney said...

Holy smokers!

s7anna said...

Oh dear GOD! Please tell me that you're almost done with *said* piece of work...b/c I NEED TO READ IT NOW!

*hugs*
Anna